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Personal Statement Review

UCAS Personal Statement

You have an upper limit of 4000 characters or 47 lines of text to write your UCAS Personal statement. Take advantage of this opportunity by submitting your draft version of your personal statement, and one of our experienced tutors can provide you valuable feedback.

You Get

A fully edited version of your personal statement.

An in-depth report highlighting the strengths and weaknesses of your statement.

Suggestions of ways to improve your statement.

Here is an exerpt of what you can expect?

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Why trust our service?

Experienced Editors: With our proven track record, our network of strategists, mentors, and tutors provide support with your essay writing process.

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Confidential service: Your personal statement can only be accessed by our team of editors and is not made available to UCAS, universities or any other organisations.

 

Plagiarism free: All changes to your personal statement will be written directly by your editor. We never copy from other personal statements, essays or any other sources.

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What’s included?

Once we’ve finished editing your personal statement, you’ll be emailed the completed statement along with a report detailing what changes we’ve made to your statement and why.

Your report will contain the following sections to help you fully understand all of our changes:

  • A detailed review of your existing personal statement

  • A summary of your strengths and weaknesses

  • A list of the improvements we’ve made and the reasons for doing so

  • Recommendations for other areas which could be improved

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The review process

You should email your personal statement to ciemaths24.7@gmail.com with details of what support you need and by when.

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Your editor will apply the same techniques used to edit books, newspaper articles and printed publications to your personal statement:

  • Correct any spelling and grammar issues

  • Fix the misuse of punctuation and capitalisation

  • Reword poorly structured sentences

  • Prune unnecessary words and over-long sentences

  • Ensure a consistent style and ‘voice’ is used throughout your statement

  • Check paragraphs flow together cleanly and the statement works as a whole

 

Your editor will also focus on issues specific to writing UCAS personal statements:

  • Show you how to write a memorable introduction

  • Ensure all topics for discussion have been adequately covered

  • Check the correct proportion of the statement has been dedicated to each topic

  • Help you articulate your strengths and skills and help sell yourself to the reader

  • Remove references to potential weaknesses or topics to avoid

  • Help you round off your statement with a solid conclusion

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How will I get my essay?

You will receive an email within your customized timeline. All feedback including grammatical corrections and feedback about the next steps will be included.

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Important: Our service is not to re-write or ghost-write any part of your essay or personal statement.

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